Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

Broken Promises: Prologue by ~ishakbible:iconishakbible:



Broken Promises
Prologue – Picture Perfect
By Janelle Baril

The perfect picture.
A moment frozen in time.
Framed and sitting upon the mantle.
Two lovers, bound by everlasting vows.
And sealed with a kiss.


She didn't need to say a word. Anger radiated from her entire being; from the tips of her twitching fox ears, to her rainbow colored toe nails. Small fires of rage smoldered in the depths of her azure eyes. A pointed fang dented her bottom lip as those unblinking eyes remained focused on her husband. He sat before her on the bed they shared. His scarlet eyes looked up at her, calm and collected. Fiery hair spilling over his shoulders and down his back. His lips parted as if to speak, but closed without a word.

“Two weeks,” She hissed, her teeth clenched together.

He couldn't stop himself from smiling, “I know. Our first anniversary.”

“And you're still going to go.”

“I don't have a choice,” He stood and took her hands in his, “My crimes will be forgiven if I do this. I'll finally be free and I won't have to leave you again.”

The fury melted away at his touch and she leaned into him, losing herself in his arms, “Can't it wait until after? It's our first...”

“I wouldn't miss it for the world,” He cupped her chin and tilted her face upwards, “No matter what I've got to do, I'll be back in time.”

“Promise?”

“Promise,” He lowered his head to claim her lips one last time before leaving, “I love you.”

The mantle was bumped.
The frame fell.
The glass cracked.
The memory was marred.
©2009 ~ishakbible
:iconishakbible:

Author's Comments

Digitally remastered!!

Pff, yeah, right.

Some of you may remember this story from a long long time ago. Heck, I have no idea how long ago because I didn't check when I first submitted these before I deleted them... But it's been a while - I'd shoot for over a year. Correction: Almost over 4 years... HOLY CRAP.

I'm re-writing the story and this time I plan to finish it. I even have a sort of idea for the chapters I didn't end up doing. Sort of... Okay, maybe not really. But I'm hoping I think of something while I'm re-writing everything.

It's similar, but actually quite different from the original prologue.

characters © Me and Carly-sama (~amichan06)
story © Me

Cover: [link]
Prologue: ---
Chapter 01: [link]
Chapter 02: [link]
Chapter 03: [link]
Chapter 04: [link]
Chapter 05: [link]
Chapter 06: [link]
Chapter 07: [link]
Chapter 08: [link]
Chapter 09: [link]
Chapter 10: [link]

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
No comments have been added yet.

Details

February 14
1.9 KB

Statistics

0
0
58 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map